Проверьте сочинение на наличие ошибок : грам., построение предложений, пунктуация ☺ i live in the city of orsk. it settles down in the orenburg area. orsk borrows 80 seat on a population in russia. orsk is considered the second in a commercial significance of the orenburg area. pride of orsk are орский the state pedagogical college, as well as branch of the orenburg state university and branch of the orenburg state college of management as their pupils borrow prize-winning places in regional and all-russia olympiads. one more pride of orsk is the hockey command « southern urals mountains » which spends house matches in a palace of sports "anniversary" as orsk — one of large transport units of russia, through it are carried out numerous passenger and freight traffic. from the western side of orsk spurs of the ural mountains amazing with the beauty tower. in the given district the set of various mountain grasses and trees grows, it is possible to observe wild-growing tulips in the spring. basically, in local seats weather pleases, as cloudless, in a year here it is more than sunny days. crisis in an ecological condition of an environment of orsk directly depends on industrial pollution. air in territory of orsk is considered the most polluted in the orenburg area.

i will try to lead small excursion on our apartment for you. so, having entered into apartment, we appear in a spacious hall. at the left there is a case and a hanger for clothes, and on the right - a curbstone and a mirror. there and then near to one party an input in kitchen, with another - doors in a bedroom of parents and a children's room. in a children's room it is light and spacious, there is an exit on a loggia. we manage here with the brother together. in our bedroom there are two beds. the left corner occupies clothes, nearby - a case for toys and books. by the way, at us fine children's library, in it very interesting books are collected. too it is a lot of toys - my brother still small.on the right party along a wall stand a curbstone for the tape recorder and the tv, a desk behind which i do homework, i draw. to tell the truth, on my desk the disorder quite often reigns, and mum is sometimes angry at me for it. over a table - book shelves where there are my textbooks, and also volumes from a series «children's encyclopaedia» which i sometimes like to esteem. on one of shelves i have allocated a place for a corner where has collected various bagatelles for memory of a trip on the sea: beautiful stones, sea cockleshells, souvenirs. i all it has arranged so that every morning, having opened eyes, i could admire beauty which reminds me that soon again there will come summer, and we all family will go again to the tender and warm sea. now you represent, as our apartment looks. come to us on a visit - and you will see, how at us is pure and cosy.

the equipment of blake and c is very good. where are  a news papers? - they are on  the desk. it is  a plant of chemical equipment  a plant is outside moscow. it is  a very large plant. it is  a fine day. we decide to go for  a walk.