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представьте, что вы побывали в одном из этих мест праздники написать письмо вашим иностранным о месте и, как вы потратили свое время там.

лишние слова подчеркнуты

1.i want to get by a good result in my exam.

2.you can't miss my house; it's opposite of the market.

3.my teacher who has been helping me to prepare for my exam.

4.i like golf, but my friend he is mad about it.

5.it's hard to understand him because of his pronunciation is bad.

6.at the end of the day i was been made to do my homework 

7.i was so nervous that i could not stop a shaking

8.when she was young she used to be work for pocket money

9.when she finished the school she decided to study law

10.she was too much tired to go out with us 

a day at the office

when john arrived at work,he knew it was going to be a bad day.his friend simon  bought two coffees and explained what happened the night before.there was a large storm in the night and the electricity supply wasn't working.they couldn't use their computers until they were fixed the next day.they had a big project to complete by five o'clock and now this was impossible.john and simon decided fo explain the situation to their boss.their boss didn't understand and fired them on the

i lke sunny hot weather becauce i can swim and sunbathe. i can spend a lot of time outdoors walking with my friends. we like to  play different games in the yard/