Use prepositions or adverbs. retell the texts. ​

i have my own room. i don't share it with my brother anymore.

my new room is large and light.i have a big bed in it ,a computer table and ,of course, a computer on it ,also there are book shelves ,wardrobe ,drawer,carpet and my favorite toys.

i put an end to end of sentence.

tim hasn*got a camel.

anne was reading a book when suddenly she heard a weird noise. she opened the window but she did not see anything unusual.then a green monster appeared in the garden.at first she screamed in horror but then she realized that it seemed familiar. she turned on the garden light and she was surprised. the wind moved her green dress on the washing line up and down making her think it was a monster.