Portfolio your school magazine asked its readers to send in short stories for the annual short story competiteon with the title: a day to remember. write your story (80-120 words). write when/where/who/what, what happened, before the main event, the main event, what happened in the end/your feelings. 30

when i was younger me and my family came   to paris on vacation. we went to eifil tower and i was lost! i tried to find a place where i saw my parents last time but i couldn’t do it. i was crying for half an hour. i opened my eyes and saw women how was trying to help me. she asked what happened with me and i said to she my problem. the main event was when she helped me and i have found my parents on the top of eifil tower. my feelings was wonderful when i have seen my mom. in the end of the story my dad gave me the phone,so i could call my parents if i have had lost again

1.her eyes were red.it was evident she cried.

2.patricia can't join us.she has broken her leg.

3.sorry for the mess.i have painted(have been painting) the house since morning.

4.which subject will you work at tonight?

5.she promised she would see me off the other day.

6.all the necessary arrangements should (will) be made as soon as possible.

7.ice hockey started in canada.

8.she has just taken her results and is getting ready to go on a holiday.

9.she was bathing the baby when we called her.

10.it is important that he would take (takes) care of his old father.

true,  students can buy bottles of water