Нужно сочинение на о моем любимом месяце для 3 класса

i very much love autumn. leaves in the autumn drop out. it to be pleasant to me when i pass and underfoot those fallen down, yellow leaves creak. in the autumn weather changes, becomes more cool. all children go to school. вроде бы правильно перевел. граматических ошибок нет

1) does she alvays come to class late? she doesn't alvays come to class late.

2) do you understand everything he says? i don't  understand everything he says.

3)was the door of the office open? the door of the office wasn't open?

4) were there few passengers in the compartment?   there weren't few passengers in the compartment.

5)will the lesson be over at 12 o'clock? the lesson won't be over at 12 o'clock

6) shall we take the children to the park?   we shan't take the children to the park.