Mary has shower and is going to dress.

возьми фото и   опиши   всю свою семью.лишних получи !  

this is my family.i have a mother,father,sister,grandmother and tow grandfathers.you can see my mother,father,sister and me on the photo.my mother's name is juliya.she is thierty-two! my father's name nick.he is thirty-eight.my sister's name liana.she is two.

and this is me.my namy is am ten.i am a pupil and i love my famely very mach.

on the whole - в целом, вообщем

in many ways - во многих отношениях, многими путями (типа достичь чего-то, решить что-то)