Сочинение по на тему" my school bag .

i very much love autumn. leaves in the autumn drop out. it to be pleasant to me when i pass and underfoot those fallen down, yellow leaves creak. in the autumn weather changes, becomes more cool. all children go to school. вроде бы правильно перевел. граматических ошибок нет

-he works in a hospital.   -he is a doctor.

she works at school.   -she is a teacher

-they fly planes.   -they are  pilots

-we are at school.   -we are  students

-i fly rockets. i am a cosmonaut