хелп ми ай кант ду ит​

when i am ill , i am in bed

жила была девочка. она была совершенно невоспитанная. она рвала цветы на клумбе,обижала младших, не здоровалась и не хотела учиться в школе. как-то раз ее  мама решила что пора с этим кончать. девочке нравился мальчик из ее класса. его звали илья.  но он не обращал на девочку внимания. и даже сторонился ее. 

все друзья и подруги девочки отвернулись от нее и не хотели с ней общаться. тогда мама объяснила девочке что,чтобы у людей складывалось хорошее впечатление о ней и она имела много друзей,ей надо стать вежливой. с тех пор девочка стала воспитанной и приятным человеком. и все у нее в жизни было хорошо. 

lived a girl. she was quite ill-mannered. she tore up the flowers in the flowerbed, offended the younger, not greeted and did not want to go to school. once her mother decided it was time to finish it. the girl liked the boy in her class. his name was ilya. but he did not pay attention to the girl. and even shunned her.

all friends and girlfriend girls turned away from her and did not want to communicate with her. then my mother explained that the girl that people have evolved a good impression on her and she had many friends, she had to be polite. since then, the girl was educated and nice person. and in her life was good.

у меня немного больше предложений,сойдет?

i was spending the night in a beautiful house  where  my friend lives. the bedroom was big and dark  so  we left the nightlight on. i was liikong at my friends doll collection  when suddenly one of the dolls turned her head, pointed at me,  then clenched her fist. i scremed  but  nothing happened. i couldnt sleep all night  because  i was too scared.

we live in a 5 storeys house in the centre of the town. we live on the third floor.our flat has 3 rooms^ a living room. a bedroom- my parents*room and my room. of course. we have a kitchen. a bathroom. a lavatory (toilet) and a  big balcony. the living room is the biggest room in our flat.it is very light and nice. there is a comfortable sofa and 2 arm- chairs here. besides there is a little tea table and a stand lamp here. the carpet and the curtains are orange. the room looks very bright. in the corner near the wide window there is a wide screen tv set and home cinema centre. we like to spend our free time here together watching tv or singing karaoke