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At last holidays came! i was very happy!   i didn't have  to get up early in the morning and run to school. i could stay in the bed till midday. but i didn't want to sleep. there were a lot of things to do. the weather was fine so my friends and i went for a walk every day. it was fun! then i spent a few days in the country where my grandfather and grandmother lived. it was great. i drank milk and ate a lot of tasty food which my granny prepared for me. i have many friends in this village because i go there every holidays. we played football and tennis every day! but  holidays were over and i returned to the city again.  i liked my holidays very much.   наконец наступили  каникулы! я был счастлив!   я не должен был вставать рано утром и бежать в школу. я мог   оставаться в постели до полудня. но я не хотел спать. было так много дел. погода была хорошая, так что мои друзья и я ходили гулять каждый день. это было весело! затем я провел несколько дней  в деревне, где   живут  мои дедушка и бабушка  . это было здорово. я пил молоко и ел много вкусной пищи, которую моя бабушка готовила для меня. у меня много друзей в этой деревне, потому что я езжу туда каждые каникулы. мы даже играли в футбол и теннис! но  каникулы закончились, и я вернулся в город снова. мне понравились мои каникулы.

The usa. by tradition children after majority don't live in america with parents, and pass to live separately. japan. almost all spheres of life of the country are penetrated by a network of traditions, especially it is appreciable in dialogue between people. by tradition japanese carefully and lovingly concern the nature, admire natural beauty of a landscape. england. fine tradition is good formation at children. the variant of private school-board is popular in men of means.

лишние слова подчеркнуты

1.i want to get by a good result in my exam.

2.you can't miss my house; it's opposite of the market.

3.my teacher who has been helping me to prepare for my exam.

4.i like golf, but my friend he is mad about it.

5.it's hard to understand him because of his pronunciation is bad.

6.at the end of the day i was been made to do my homework 

7.i was so nervous that i could not stop a shaking

8.when she was young she used to be work for pocket money

9.when she finished the school she decided to study law

10.she was too much tired to go out with us 

это время настоящие , которое происходит постоянно.

когда стоят местоимения she he it ставится указательный глагол does , а когда we i they , то ставится указательный глагол do.чаще всего есть указатели , такие как : usually today every day