Нужно
добавить к каждой категории по два своих примера.

my family consists of  three people.  i'm  mom and dad.  i  was nineteen,  i work  in a hospitalspetsalistom  hr.  my  mother  thirty-seven years.  she has her own  shop,  it  privateperdprinematel.  my father  for forty years.  he works for  an oil company.  we love  to spend timetogether  often.  our family is very  friendly,  we help each other  in everything "

people all over the world are fond of sport. sport activities are very important for the growing organism of a child. children showed not neglect this fact.

there are many sport clubs that they can join us. light athletics gives much opportunity to those who go in for it. it includes track field events: running, long-jumping, high jumping, discus throwing and others.

many children are fond of ball games: basketball, volleyball, football. they are so exiting. besides they are played all year round. children like to take part in the competitions to see who is the quickest, the strongest, who can jump best, who is the best swimmer or player. pupils in different classes hold competitions in different kinds of sport. many boys and girls show good results. all the competitions and games are very popular with the pupils. a lot of fans always come to watch them.

my favourite sport is basketball. basketball is a wonderful sport. it; s a good exercise too. it makes us strong and healthy.

to become a good sportsman you must train a lot. if you want to be good at something you have to work hard. practice makes perfect.

pudding - пуддинг,redeemer - спаситель,  present - подарок. мне кажется, что у вас опечатка.

as  cool as a cucumber,as strong as a horse,as cool as a cucumber.,as deaf as a bat,as bling as a post,as clear as a crystal ,as sly as a fox,as slow as a tortoise,as sweet as a honey,as mad as a hare.