Teenagers today have too much free time эссе

Если эссе необходимо писать по егэ типу: nowadays some people may hold the opinion that teenagers have too much free time. but teenagers argue that they haven't got it at all. so who is right? to my mind, nowadays teenagers haven't got too much free time. first of all, they spend a lot of time at school and while doing their homework. what is more, when they comes after school tired, moms are always starting nagging about the more grows teenager up the lazier he or she becomes. secondly, all teens have hobbies as sports, math or painting. they always try to find a way they can do it, because it is one thing that can make them feel relaxed. neverthless, some people disagree, saying that teens spend a lot of time serfing the internet, watching tv or going out with friends. however, i think that nowadays teenagers can not live without internet. there they always can ask something or check their homework with others. it really helps with reducing time of doing homework. to sum up, teenagers don't have so much free time to do nothing. every movement in their lifes is important, it affluents on their future.

Ihave a cat. its name is murka. murka is black and white. it is 2 years old. my cat is very funny. it is very nice too. i like to  play with murka.  it likes to play with a ball. it can jump and run, but it cannot swim.  it  likes to eat fish and to drink milk. it likes to sleep too. i like my pet. у меня есть кошка. ее зовут мурка. она чёрно-белая. ей 2 года. она любит рыбую. моя кошка забавная. она красивая тоже. я люблю играть с муркой. она любит играть с мячиком. она умеет прыгать и бегать, но не умеет плавать.  она любит есть рыбу и пить молоко. она также любит поспать. я люблю своего питомца. транскрипция (произношение слов):   aɪ  hæv  ə  kæt.  ɪts  neɪm  ɪz  murka.  murka  ɪz  blæk  ænd  waɪt.  ɪt ɪz  2  jɪəz  əʊld.  maɪ  kæt  ɪz  ˈvɛri  ˈfʌni.  ɪt  ɪz  ˈvɛri  naɪs  tuː.  aɪ  laɪk  tuː  pleɪ  wɪð  murka.  ɪt  laɪks  tuː  pleɪ  wɪð  ə  bɔːl.  ɪt  kæn  ʤʌmp  ænd  rʌn,  bʌt    it ˈkænɒt  swɪm. ɪt  laɪks  tuː  iːt  fɪʃ  ænd  tuː  drɪŋk mɪlk.  ɪt  laɪks  tuː  sliːp  tuː.  aɪ  laɪk    maɪ    pɛt .