Есть ли здесь ошибки (английский диалог)?

Hi dear co-worker, how's your day going? Thanks, it's fine. How are you doing? I'm so tired of all work. Where's your chief? He called me an hour ago and said that he will be away in a week since he's got some acute stuff to do in Moscow. Such awesome news! Let's have a break then! I don't really like him. He's always complaining about something. Would you like to have some coffe? Yes, sure. I've got a new PC-game. Let's try it out and listen some music meanwhile. Holly shit, that was such an amazing game. By the way, i have two cinema tickets, would you like to have a company with me and hang out to watch some movie? I love watching movies! I suggest to go there immediately! I think we should take a time off tomorrow instead. Lovely, i'm not gonna work tomorrow. The chief will be away an entire week, anyway. Farewell everyone! Bye! Скажите, пожалуйста, грамотно ли составлен диалог? Если есть ошибки, то напишите какие